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Okay, next, were you inspired by any classic authors to write this? [[Yes|Ask-2a]] [[No|Ask-2b]]
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But enough about your work. What about you? You exciting? [[Yes|Ask-4a]] [[No|Ask-4b]]
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So, um, you looking for a new internet clique? Hoping writing this would help? [[Yes|Ask-5a]] [[No|Ask-5b]]
<</widget>>This isn't about any specific person or group but a general search for acceptance.
[[Got it.|Congrats]]Congratulations! Your writing doesn't stink!
Here's a few questions about your work.
[[Thanks for caring!|Ask-1]]Was it [[spur of the moment|Ask-1a]], or [[dribbled out over time|Ask-1b]]?Ah! That explains certain wobbly bits. No, no detailed critique. Just, smile and feel lucky, kid!
<<choice2>>Ugh, I liked it, but if it took TOO long... plodding!
<<choice2>>Yes, I see it. The strongest parts remind me of ... hey, don't go to the well too often, eh?
[[Onward|Ask-3]]Well, some parts reminded me of a favorite of MINE. More like than as. No offense.
It's that one kinda obscure book of theirs. I'm in the know.
[[Onward|Ask-3]]So will your next work be [[like this|Ask-3a]] or [[completely different|Ask-3b]]?Y'know, there's risk of getting stale. True facts, you were pushing it by the end.
<<choice3>>Brave, but I don't know if you had full enough control of your writing to try something new. Don't get me wrong, it was good for what it was, and it kept me entertained...
<<choice3>>Well, not gonna ask for REFERENCES or anything, but that's a bit of pride, isn't it?
<<choice4>>Well, if you're looking for a support group that will say "oh no you're nice/interesting/inspiring/deserving, really you are" here isn't the place. Just so you know.
<<choice4>>Just to check off. Your writing better give something back, for all our engaging conversation. Reciprocity and all that.
[[Awkward silence|Finale]]Hate to say it, but we've had our share of people who submit writing just to get critiques, then they're mad we don't really know them and missed the point. So, just don't be them, okay?
[[Awkward silence|Finale]]Hey, just bringing up some important ontological and theoretical questions you should think about. Maybe you have. But probably not enough.
I hope my dialogue was simple enough to understand but also contained hidden layers of meaning. Maybe one of your works can, too, some day.
Anyway. Feel good about what you wrote if you want. Maybe even feel lucky the ideas chose to land on you and maybe not someone more exciting, for whatever reason.
Hope this made you think!
[[Nod|End]]Well, thanks for your time. I don't spend time with just anyone, you know. And when I do, I keep it real.
You should feel lucky you wrote something that avoided one of my negative reviews. Sometimes I wonder why I bother, since I'm not paid. Some of the writing is torture. But I can roll with the punches and cope. Character is important, you'll agree?<font size=+3><center>CONGRATS!!!</center></font>